Westward Bound – a writing journey

16 01 2012
My wife, Denise, and I like to travel.  We don’t often get to travel with our friends and family, but we love to take them with us to share in our adventures.  To do that, we write about our adventures and share pictures.

Typically, it is enough to share our Travelpod site and keep that updated as we go along.  But in May 2011, as we rolled across the open plains on our way to Moab, Utah, I decided that a standard travel blog was not going to be enough.  You see, we really wanted to share the experience with our two nieces, Amelia and Adrianna.  They are a bit too young for a cross country road trip (or we’re too old to want to travel that far with a six-year-old and a three-year-old), so I decided to write a story about them.  In the story, they would take the road trip with us.  In order to add a dash of adventure and daring, I set the story back in the 1870s and put them on the Oregon Trail.

With Denise’s excellent photography and book layout skills and a lot of editing help from my brother-in-law, Patrick, I was able to have it printed and ready for them in time for Christmas.

They liked it.

A lot.

I figured they might. They love books, and what’s better than reading a story about yourself?

And since they liked it, I thought a few other people might enjoy it.  A few weeks of Kindle formatting later, and I published it through the Kindle Store!

Click the image to purchase!

I’d love for you to take a read. This is a book for kids, but don’t go in expecting Dr. Seuss.  There are lots of words, but we offset that with over forty beautiful photographs that Denise took on our trip West.

Don’t have a Kindle?  You don’t need one!  Just buy it with your Amazon account, and it will ask you where you want to send it.

You can purchase without owning a Kindle!

Just choose to use the Cloud Reader. It’s actually a great way to read the book, and the photos are in full color and look amazing.

If you do read it, I would really appreciate it if you left a review on Amazon!

And if you do or don’t read it, I’d love it if you shared this article, or a link to the book on Facebook, Twitter, or any other social site.

And now, here’s a quick excerpt from the book.

 

Chapter 1: Running out of space

PA WAS in the barn.  It seemed he was there an awful lot lately.  Amelia remembered that last winter, Pa spent most of his time playing with her and building a rocking horse.  He had painted the horse black.  She and her little sister called it Chocolate and loved to play on it.

Ma was in the kitchen salting beef and putting it in jars and crates.  Her shoulder-length, curly, auburn hair kept falling into her eyes as she worked.  Usually Ma would sit with Amelia and play school with her.  Amelia would answer questions like 19 + 7 or How many apples did Susy have left if she picked 10 and gave 3 away?  Ma told her she was really smart.  Her little sister, Adriana, would listen for a while, but then she would take Ma and Amelia’s coffee order and bustle off to her imaginary kitchen.  She would return quickly to serve it before taking the pretend dishes to pretend wash them.

Even Grandma was busy in the kitchen; she had been working since before the sun was up! Grandma had short, black hair and always had a loving smile for Amelia.  It sure seemed odd to Amelia that Grandma and Ma would be working so hard.  The food for the winter had already been gathered and stored; Amelia had even helped this year!

Amelia was a tall, thin, red-headed girl that would turn six in the spring. Her big, beautiful, brown eyes did not miss a thing.  She was always interested in what the grown-ups were doing, and she was smart enough to understand most of it.  Adriana, was a pretty little girl with curly brown hair and an easy laugh.  She was too intent on her jigsaw puzzle and cooking imaginary food for her dolls to notice the change in routine the last few weeks.  Amelia had done her best to ignore it, but her curiosity was getting the better of her.  She stood up from her math flash cards and yelled to her mother in the kitchen.

“Ma-a-a-a!” she cried.  “Why aren’t you playing with us?”

Her mother’s reply was lost in the howl of the wind from the suddenly open door.  Pa stood in the doorway with an excited look on his face and a letter in his hand.  His usually neatly-combed brown hair was mussed from the wind and he must have knocked his small, round spectacles as he hustled inside. They were crookedly hanging to the side of his large nose.

“Carolyn!  It finally came!” he yelled.

“Shut the door before we all catch the sickness,” Ma yelled back.

Pa came in with Grandpa right behind.  Grandpa’s windblown, white hair was sticking straight up in the air as he ambled over to Adriana.  He laughed as he grabbed Adriana under the arm pits and swung her into the air.  Adriana squealed with excitement.

Ma came out of the kitchen and Pa swept her up into his arms and twirled her around.

“Aaron and Denise finally wrote from Independence, Missouri.  They have purchased wagons and supplies and signed us up with a group of other pioneers heading to Oregon!  We are to meet them in early May.”

“That is fine news, David!  We have just about finished packing the food for the trip,” Ma said.

Amelia and Adriana both perked up at the sound of their favorite Aunt and Uncle’s names.  They did not see them often because they traveled so much, but they were great fun to play with.

Amelia was happy to see her parents smile.  She knew they worked very hard to put food on the table and a roof over her head.  But she also felt uneasy.  She didn’t know what Independence was or what a pie o’ near could be.  She sat back down and listened intently to the strange and complex world of the grown-ups.





Review of The Lost Symbol by Dan Brown

6 04 2010

A lot was expected of Dan Brown in this third book with his symbologist hero, Robert Langdon. The Da Vinci Code was a worldwide phenomenon and religious fire-starter. I’ve read it numerous times and think it’s great. Angels and Demons, which came before Da Vinci Code, was a great book as well. I’ve read his other books and enjoyed them all.

So, how well did Brown follow up on his success? Financially, I’m sure he did very well. In literary terms, not nearly as well. I’m not going to rag on Brown for it. It’s tough to keep mining the same formula and continue to come up with hits every year. Just ask EA Sports with their Madden football franchise. They’ve been kicking out the same game every year for decades. Sometimes it’s good, sometimes it’s bad, but it’s typically entertaining and people eat it up. Brown’s book was entertaining, but it wasn’t good.

Let’s break down the formula Brown has used in his Langdon books. Then you’ll know what to expect from the Lost Symbol.

Smart professor knowledgeable in ancient symbols and history (sp)
+
Mysterious artifact (a)
+
Mysterious assassin with some sort of malady (ma)
+
Even more mysterious person pulling the assassins strings (ol)
+
Short chapters that make you want to turn the page (pt)
-
Character development (cd)
-
Intricate plots (ip)
*
Interesting locations and better –than-a-tour-guide knowledge of the location (t)
/
Dramatic reveal at the end of the book that you probably saw coming (r)
=
Bestseller (b)

Let’s clean that formula up, so other aspiring authors can use it.
(((sp + a + ma + ol) – (cd + ip)) * t) / r = b

Rating: 3 out of 5 (What’s This?)

Read on my Kindle. See my Kindle review.

Purchase this book at Amazon.com





Captain’s Fury by Jim Butcher

9 03 2010

I just finished reading Captain’s Fury (ok, so I actually wrote that on January 17th, but I’m trying to pace these posts out a bit for you :) , which is the fourth installment of the Codex Alera. I downloaded it on Friday to my new Kindle. Early Sunday morning, I finished it. Yup, it was that good. I’m sorely tempted to get the next two in the series, take a couple of vacation days, and have the series done by next week.

Jim Butcher has crafted a marvelous world set in what appears to be the Roman era, except this time things are a little more fantastical, since the Alerans have a sort of magic they call Furycraft. Everyone does, that is except Tavi, the story’s main hero. In the previous book, Cursor’s Fury, that had begun to change. In this book, we find out all the reasons why.

The fulcrum of the story remains simple. Tavi is in a tough spot. He must find a way to get out of it. He has some great friends that help him. Bad people want to kill him.

If you have read fantasy, you have read it before. That’s where Butcher comes in. He keeps the story fresh. It is funny. It is intense. It is dark. It is merciless. It is kind. It is sad. It is happy. It is all the shades of gray in between. I don’t know how he does it, but I’m impressed and I can’t wait to finish the series.

Butcher is quickly becoming my favorite author. I have now read eight of his books, and I have been entertained by each of them. There are another five of his books on my shelf right now, and I definitely will be buying the other two books in this series.

Rating: 4 out of 5 (What’s This?)

Oh. This is the first book I read on my Kindle. That was pretty cool. Read my Kindle review here.





Kindle 2 Review

12 02 2010

I love books and so does my wife. She spent a month working in a cold garage a few Januaries ago to build us some sweet bookshelves. I think we currently own about 500 books. You can see most of what is in our library here.

I also love technology. I’m a web programmer by trade. I grew up playing video games and continue to do so with my Xbox 360. I like buying apps for my cell phone.

So, the Kindle is a conundrum for me. I like having books in my library. I like using the latest technology. It was going to be a difficult choice on whether or not I bought a Kindle. Lucky for me, I received one for Christmas. Now that’s a great gift, but it comes with some hard choices. Even now that I have the Kindle, I am still torn between getting “real” books, and getting the digital version.

I decided I couldn’t make an informed decision without trying the Kindle out. I logged on to the Amazon store from the Kindle, using it’s free 3G service called Whispernet. I did a search for “Captain’s Fury”, and the book was pulled up a few seconds later. I could read reviews, and it also told me that print price of the book, and my special, Kindle only price, which was a few dollars cheaper.

I clicked on the buy button and it was automatically purchased through my Amazon account. 19 seconds later, the book was ready to read and I was on my way.

I figured the only way to really test the Kindle was to read extensively and see what happened. Or at least that was the excuse I gave my wife while I read in the basement all day on Saturday. Really, it was just a great book. The best way to sum up the Kindle is that I forgot that it was there. It didn’t seem any different than reading a book.

Here’s a pro and con list for the Kindle. Hopefully it can help me clear up my questions about how I’m going to treat my Kindle, and give you some insight into it as well.

PROs

  1. It’s easy on the eyes. With its very cool e-ink display, I never had an issue with eye strain while I read for a full day. And with the ability to change the font size on the fly, no one else will either.
  2. It’s easy on the eyes. Um, in a different way. It is a cool product to look at. The height and width is a bit larger than a standard paper back, but definitely smaller than a hard cover or those dopey, super large paper backs that are appearing everywhere now. And it’s thin. Very thin.
  3. I can browse and buy books from anywhere. This is great if I’m ever without a book, or if I just want to hop on the web (since it does have an integrated browser).
  4. It can hold 1500+ books at one time. My suitcase cannot do that. Granted, I don’t generally need more than a few books at a time when I travel. But, with the saved space, I can bring more chocolate. Sweet! Oh, and if I ever end up with a bad book while I’m in China, like when I had to read through Anne Rice’s Angel Time, I don’t need to plow through it because there is nothing else to read. That’s a nice bonus.
  5. Women dig the Kindle. No, really, they do. My wife read Dan Brown’s, The Lost Symbol on it. She thought the Kindle was great, but the book was not so hot.
  6. When you turn off the Kindle, a different screen saver shows up each time. I found myself just turning on and off the Kindle just to see what would show up.
  7. There is a built in dictionary. If you don’t know what a word is, just move the cursor over it, and you won’t be wondering any longer.
  8. Tons of classic books on Amazon that you can download for free. My wife was pumped that Pride and Prejudice was on there. I downloaded some Sherlock Holmes, The Last of the Mohicans, The Odyssey, The Prince, The Island of Doctor Moreau, and a bunch of other books that I probably won’t read yet, but they seem cool. They are there if I need them on a plane ride back from China.
  9. You can load music on it, and it will play in the background while you read. There’s a headphone jack too.
  10. It can play an audio book, or just read the text of a regular book for you.
  11. It takes up a lot less space than a library, and uses less paper to do it.
  12. The books are less expensive than buying a book at the store.
  13. It is way better to read War and Peace at night in your bed on the Kindle, than it is with a massive hardcover. I tried that last year and the book kept falling on me.
  14. I love to read while I eat lunch or dinner. The Kindle is much better suited for that. You don’t have to try and eat one handed, or prop open the pages of a stiff paper back. It just lies nicely and you can use the side of one finger to change pages. And if it gets food on it, just wipe it down.

CONs

  1. You can’t share books. I love reading a book, and then giving it to my wife, or to a friend. With a $10 book, I don’t mind doing that. With my $250+ Kindle, I do mind. Greatly. However, up to six people can share a Kindle account. You each need a Kindle, and you have to trust the people in the group to not just go buying a bunch of stuff and not paying for it, but it is a way to have a book group or share with friends. Hopefully the Barnes and Noble Nook, which can share books, will push the Kindle a bit in that direction. Just let me share it with 2 or 3 people.
  2. The cost of the device is rather prohibitive. But then again, it’s the top selling item on Amazon, so maybe I’m wrong about that. It’s prohibitive to me, how about that?
  3. I can’t just walk into my library and see my books there. I have to show someone my Kindle account to show them my library. Or start a library at my website: http://www.libzig.com to show them the library in a little nicer format.
  4. If the Kindle breaks, I have to buy a new one to read my books. Or read them on the PC with the Kindle on PC app. This one kind of sucks. It’s definitely worth getting a cover for it. There are a lot of covers to choose from, but I chose this one. It does the job and looks great doing it.
  5. The cost of an individual book seems a bit high. I understand that publishers want to make money, so offering a new book at $10 and old books for less than that makes sense to them, but it isn’t really supply and demand. The supply is unlimited. The cost, I have to think, isn’t too high once the file is created. It isn’t like they have to go print more. And don’t get me wrong, I’m all for paying people for their work. If I like the book, I’m happy to pay the money for it. It just seems like we should be able to find a standard price and stick to it. $5 for books past 90 days, $10 for books in the first 90 days after release seems pretty reasonable to me. The costs to publishers to create the book is down, so why not bring the cost down too.
  6. Asking for an Amazon Gift card is lamer (more lame?) than asking for an actual tome you can put on your shelf.

Hmm. It seems the pros outweigh the cons in number. The Kindle 2 is a really slick device. I enjoyed reading a book on it, and will do so in the future. I’m still now sure how I’ll handle my purchases on it. I’m not ready to abandon my physical library. I think I’ll follow this rule of thumb:
If someone wants to get me a gift, I’ll ask for the physical book.
If I am buying for myself, I’ll buy the digital version.
If I am going to travel with a book, I’ll buy the digital version, even if I already own the book.
And finally, if I really enjoy a series that I only have digital copies of, I’ll buy the set of books so I can proudly display them. I’m looking at you Lord of the Rings, Dark Tower, and Harry Potter.

Get your own Kindle 2 here!








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